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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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Many countries in todays world are considered under developed and struggle for basic needs of life
such
 as food and education, whereas there are many nations which are well developed and has the capacity of supporting other nations as well.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons why the wealthier countries should help the under
priviliged
blessed with privileges
privileged
 nations and what are the responsibilities of the governments of poor countries towards their citizens. Countries which are already developed should help other countries because as they have abundant resources to
fullfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their needs, the poorer nations lack them. In my opinion,
the wealthier
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the wealthy
 nations should contribute some share of their money
with
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to
 the under
priviliged
blessed with privileges
privileged
 nations so that they can have enough food and education which will help them develop.
For instance
, the developed countries can help others who
has suffered
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have suffered
 from any natural calamities to cope up with their damages. Even though other countries try to help the poor nations
,
Accept space
,
 the main responsibility of taking care of their citizens is
of
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on
 the government. The government should take measures to
helop
give help or assistance; be of service
help
 people get food in daily basis and
shekter
a structure that provides privacy and protection from danger
shelter
 to live in. They should take initiatives for providing free educations to
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 which
wll
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
 help the
younsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
youngster
to get
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get
job
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a job
 which will directly
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 the economy of the nation. In conclusion, the sole responsibility of taking care of the nation is of the
goovernment whereas
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government, whereas
government whereas
 other countries can
also
 contribute according to their wish.

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