It is commonly believed that some people are with certain talents for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both views and give tour opinion.
The world would have been a ghost land if all we do is to eat, live and die. It is assumed that individuals have inherent abilities on their inside in order to make them great in areas
such
as sports and music. Despite Linking Words
this
, I believe that anyone can be trained to be as great or even greater those who have these skills within them.
On the one hand, talents are inborn. Linking Words
That is
, individuals that have these unique abilities in them, do not necessarily have to labour to give them expressions. They are expressed with ease and joy. Linking Words
For example
, the Punch newspaper described Michael Jackson as a legendary singer that ever lived. The beauty of his songs came from the depth of inspired skills without any thorough training. Linking Words
Thus
, these inbuilt capacities are all that was needed
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On the other hand
, I do not believe that the reason above is sufficient to explain success. Anyone can be tutored to be great. Linking Words
This
is because as humans, we have a genetic make-up to be anything without necessarily being gifted. As long as the principles of discipline, consistency and hard work can be applied. The Psychology department of the University of Lagos reported that Linking Words
Ronaldo Van
Peter, a less talented but hardworking player, had received more awards than the gifted Lionel Messi. He Accept comma addition
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acheived
to gain with effort
achieved
this
by undergoing the pains of discipline. Linking Words
Consequently
, he became a force in today's soccer.
In conclusion, there are several factors necessary for greatness. Linking Words
However
, the most essential is training. Linking Words
This
pattern, if harnessed, would be the new pathway to the top.Linking Words
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