It is commonly believed that some people are with certain talents for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both views and give tour opinion.

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The world would have been a ghost land if all we do is to eat, live and die. It is assumed that individuals have inherent abilities on their inside in order to make them great in areas

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as sports and music. Despite

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, I believe that anyone can be trained to be as great or even greater those who have these skills within them. On the one hand, talents are inborn.

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, individuals that have these unique abilities in them, do not necessarily have to labour to give them expressions. They are expressed with ease and joy.

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, the Punch newspaper described Michael Jackson as a legendary singer that ever lived. The beauty of his songs came from the depth of inspired skills without any thorough training.

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, these inbuilt capacities are all that was needed

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, I do not believe that the reason above is sufficient to explain success. Anyone can be tutored to be great.

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is because as humans, we have a genetic make-up to be anything without necessarily being gifted. As long as the principles of discipline, consistency and hard work can be applied. The Psychology department of the University of Lagos reported that

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Peter, a less talented but hardworking player, had received more awards than the gifted Lionel Messi. He

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achieved

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by undergoing the pains of discipline.

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, he became a force in today's soccer. In conclusion, there are several factors necessary for greatness.

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, the most essential is training.

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pattern, if harnessed, would be the new pathway to the top.

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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It is commonly believed that some people are with certain talents for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both views and give tour opinion.

Your opinion

Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people who can help renovate the building and also do other jobs. Write a letter to the principal of the school and say: - how would you be able to help? - When and why would you do it? - Who will help you to do it?

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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