Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Some people do believe that clothes are the indication of a person's value and traditions. I do agree with

this

to an extent, but not completely. In

this

essay, I would like to present my views with supporting examples.

Firstly

, with diversification all over the world, a plethora of things

such

as language, clothing, rituals varies from place to place. People from different states and countries, dress in a variety of ways based on the climatic conditions and, various other factors

such

as safety, economy, comfort and so on.

Although

, we might get to know their culture, it is impossible to judge one's personality, based on the attire.

For example

, one can recognize a Bengali woman by the colour, style of the saree they carry.

However

, a human character can never be decided by what they wear, but on their education, empathy, knowledge and intellect. Character is built over the years based on one's interest, brought up, friendships and

also

the surroundings.

For instance

, I have seen plenty of people, who dress modestly but, they live a life full of energy, passion, adventure. They are ambitious and reached greater heights in their respective careers and lives. Achievers like Mahatma Gandhi, Mack Zuckerburg, Mother Teressa dressed simply and, let their deeds speak for them. Since, culture and character are two exclusive things and, are least related to the way of dressing up, I conclude saying that everyone should have the freedom of outfit without the fear of being judged by the public.

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attire
fashion trends
individuality
first impressions
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social status
cultural appropriation
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symbolism in clothing
cultural identity
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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Writing, reading and maths are the three recognized traditional subjects. Computer skill should also be the fourth largest branch. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that it's easier for adults to learn skills (Ex: Computer skills) by themselves. Others think they need the help of a teacher in a classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion as well.