You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to bring to your notice the problems am facing currently in the present

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accomodation

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accommodation

. Right now am staying in the shared

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accomodation

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accommodation

with another student,

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however

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there are many problems associated with

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arrangement. Because of

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, it is causing me a big problem to

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concentrate

on my studies and finish my assignments on time. The main problem am facing is that

the

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another

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student disturbs me a

lot

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during my studies, keeps the laptop on speakers,

late night

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parties, drinks and so on. They neither let me

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concentrate

on my

work

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nor stay silent. With all these am not able to get proper sleep

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the

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night and

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not able to

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concentrate

in the class the

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day. My grades are turning worse with every test and it has become a big worry for me. Adding to

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, he and his friends smoke a

lot

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inside the

room

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which causes a

lot

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of suffocation due to less ventilation which in turn troubled me a

lot

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casuing

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causing

lung infection. Another issue is that there has been a recent pavement

work

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that has been started very close to my

room

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which brings

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lot

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of dust and smoke into the

room

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. I already have sinus issues and

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is making things

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Everytime

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I enter the

room

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, I have to

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vacuum

each and everything and

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continue with the daily routine.

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makes me drain

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lot

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of energy and not able to cope up with the

work

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. I would request you to provide me with

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better

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accomodation

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accommodation

prerably

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preferably

probably

a private

room

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with

shared

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bath and kitchen.

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way the entire

room

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will be mine and I can concentrate on my studies and

assigments

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assignments

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Also

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one more point to be added, I would be glad if I could get a

room

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a little inside the campus far from the

mainstreet

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main street

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to avoid the noise from the traffic or any reconstruction

work

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. Please take

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into your consideration and help me by providing

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good and clean

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accomodation

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accommodation

Tue Sep 03 2019

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

345 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
respectfully request

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