You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice the problems am facing currently in the present

accomodation

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accommodation

. Right now am staying in the shared

accomodation

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accommodation

with another student,

however

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there are many problems associated with

this

arrangement. Because of

this

, it is causing me a big problem to

concentarte

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concentrate

on my studies and finish my assignments on time. The main problem am facing is that

the

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another

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student disturbs me a

lot

during my studies, keeps the laptop on speakers,

late night

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parties, drinks and so on. They neither let me

concentarte

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concentrate

on my

work

nor stay silent. With all these am not able to get proper sleep

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the

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night and

hence

not able to

concentarte

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concentrate

in the class the

day. My grades are turning worse with every test and it has become a big worry for me. Adding to

this

, he and his friends smoke a

lot

inside the

room

which causes a

lot

of suffocation due to less ventilation which in turn troubled me a

lot

casuing

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causing

lung infection. Another issue is that there has been a recent pavement

work

that has been started very close to my

room

which brings

lot

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of dust and smoke into the

room

. I already have sinus issues and

this

is making things

bad

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Everytime

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I enter the

room

, I have to

vaccum

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vacuum

each and everything and

then

continue with the daily routine.

This

makes me drain

lot

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of energy and not able to cope up with the

work

. I would request you to provide me with

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better

accomodation

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accommodation

prerably

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preferably

probably

a private

room

with

shared

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bath and kitchen.

This

way the entire

room

will be mine and I can concentrate on my studies and

assigments

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assignments

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one more point to be added, I would be glad if I could get a

room

a little inside the campus far from the

mainstreet

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main street

Mainstreet

to avoid the noise from the traffic or any reconstruction

work

. Please take

this

into your consideration and help me by providing

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good and clean

accomodation

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accommodation

Tue Sep 03 2019

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Word repetition
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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