The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below
The provided pie charts compare the proportion of seven different categories, food,
cars
, petrol, restaurants, furniture, computers and books, in the year of
1966 and 1996 by Change preposition
apply
American
Residents. Overall
, Americans spent a large section of money on food in 1966. By comparison
, their
majority expending Change the word
the
was
comprised of Correct subject-verb agreement
were
cars
in 1996.
In 1966, American
Citizens spent 44% for
food, which was the largest sector of their expenditure. The Change preposition
on
second
largest sector was cars
that
composed 23% of the total annual spending. Correct pronoun usage
which
While
computers had only 1%, petrol had nearly one in ten (9%) in
the same time. Furniture had one in ten (10%); it was followed by restaurants, which had 7%, Change preposition
at
while
the third
were
books, with 6%.
In 1996, the composition of spending altered dramatically compared to that of 1966. Change the verb form
was
American
Citizens spent on cars
constituted the largest section of the annual expenditure, which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
more
than Add a missing verb
is more
two fifths
(45%). The percentage of Add a hyphen
two-fifths
American
citizens spending on restaurants had doubled from 7% in 1966 to 14% in 1996. Spending on books was highest in 1966, at 6%. By contrast
, there was no significant change in the proportions of petrol and furniture.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, american with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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