In many countries, people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and thrown away . What are the causes of this and what are problems does it lead to ?

It is certainly true that in many parts of the world, individuals do not
use
things for
long
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a long time
time
and after
use
things for
short
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a short time
time
, they
thrown
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have thrown
are thrown
threw
the things as garbage.
This
essay will discuss causes and problems caused by
this
habit of individuals before reaching to a reasonable
coclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
.
First
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The first
and the foremost cause
by
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of
the things thrown away after
use
for
short period
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a short period
short periods
of
time
is that people are always excited to buy new things. To exemplify, in
modern era
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the modern era
, there is
revolutionary invention
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a revolutionary invention
of new things which has fully changed the contemporary world and people are always
exicted
(of persons) excessively affected by emotion
excited
to buy these things and if there is
new thing
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a new thing
in
market
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the market
, individuals always have excitement to buy new things and they do not
use
old things. The other cause is that most of the people are not aware about the 3Rs
such
as reuse, recycle, reduce.
For instance
, according to the recent survey, it is found that there are many people who
use
the things for a short period of
time
, they do not know that if they
use
a thing only for one
time
, they
can be reuse
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can reuse
can be reused
such
objects.
Moreover
, when people
use
plastic bottles, they can
use
it for other purpose as
well but
Accept comma addition
well, but
they do not care about it.
Thus
, by
this
way, there are the causes that
arised
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have arisen
arisen
are arisen
arose
raised
by
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from
this
habit of people.
On the other hand
, with these causes, plethora of problems are caused.
Firstly
, pollution, people
are continuously doing
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is continuously doing
the things that pollute environment.
For example
, when an individual
use
a plastic bottle, once a
time
at home, they throw it. Plastic
can not
can not
cannot
be damaged easily which causes problems related to nature, even, if they burn the plastic, harmful gases are released in
this
way.
Next
, it affected their money as well because in up- market, objects are too expensive, so,
desire
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the desire
to buy new things, after the little
use
of old things create problems related to their income.
As a result
, by
this
, individuals facing many problems. To conclude, after analysing whole essay, I firmly believe that
althoug
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
, there are too many causes and problems arise with the
use
of things for
very short
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a very short time
time
, yet people should be aware about it and the administration need to take steps
for
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in
this
.
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