Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree

Vaccinating children
has become
Suggestion
have become
increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of society. These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and as
such
are not needed.
This
essay will argue why vaccinating against spreadable diseases is entirely necessary despite some potential risks. Parents have always been wary of vaccinating their children. They are justifiably worried about injecting their children with unfamiliar substances that could potentially make them sick. Parents naturally feel protective of their children. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of
children unfortunately
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children, unfortunately
reacting adversely to their injections. These few instances have bolstered existing fears in parents that vaccinations are not necessary and potentially more dangerous than the possibility of contracting the communicable disease itself. Despite the minor risks associated with vaccinating children, the idea that they are unnecessary and dangerous is completely preposterous. Vaccines have prevented vast numbers of deaths over hundreds of years in countries around the world. The number of deaths so
fat
located at a great distance in time or space or degree
far
prevented far outweighs the number of children who have been adversely affected by the immunisations
themselves
objective case of they
them
. Some diseases have actually been completely eradicated through vaccination campaigns. Overall, the idea that vaccinations are unnecessary and dangerous is ill-informed and dangerous in itself and could potentially lead to a far worse outcome for society.
This
essay argued that people who are against vaccination have a flawed understanding of vaccinations and underestimate the
affects
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effects
of what they believe. In my opinion, vaccinating children is an absolute imperative
that is
entirely justified despite the small and occasional risk involved.
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