It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There's a school of thought supporting the expenditure of tax funds towards promoting healthy lifestyle practices and disease prevention over spending exorbitantly on

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of the sick. While in theory

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might sound good,

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practical applications are far from ideal. I disagree with the above statement and

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essay will discuss my views regarding the same.

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, disease prevention is a step in the right direction when it comes to promoting health for all. In today's era, where fast

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is cheaper than its healthier alternative and where the preference is to order

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from restaurants over cooking at home, awareness needs to be created over how detrimental

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choice is.

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, creating emphasis on building immunity and living healthy

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reduces the load on hospitals to care for them,

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in turn saving

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government expenses.

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, advertisements can be directed at the general population urging them to adopt regular exercise and choose

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that provides energy over fried

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. Meanwhile, cutting down the funding for

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of the sick puts all effort spent on promoting healthy living to waste. Ill patients with insufficient

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will spread disease regardless of any practice that one adopts to stay healthy.

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primary focus

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the primary focus

needs to be put on curing any source of illness and controlling the outcome. In today's times of

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and antibiotic-resistant bacteria, sole maintenance of one's health doesn't get the job done. Apt

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and isolation of the sick needs to be focused upon, which requires proper facilities and public funding to build and maintain them. To conclude, focusing the expenditure on promoting healthy practices rather than spending on treating the ill is not the best way to ensure

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the health

of a community.

Treatment

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of the ill requires more attention and funding in comparison.