Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that plenty of animals and plants are vanishing due to environmental issues while others believe that other problems are serious.
This
essay  supports  the
first
few and will  discuss the reason why few
species
of flora and fauna disappearing and
then
talk about other environmental threats. The major reason behind the loss of
species
of animals is that hunting activities are increased so the life of animals who live in
jungle
Suggestion
the jungle
is in threat.
In other words
, if a group of hunters
are hunting
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is hunting
an animal
then
the subject matter of a conversation or discussion
theme
, it becomes dangerous for that creature to live on the
Plantet
(astronomy) any of the nine large celestial bodies in the solar system that revolve around the sun and shine by reflected light; Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in order of their proximity to the sun; viewed from the constellation Hercules, all the planets rotate around the sun in a counterclockwise direction
planet
and it leads animals to disappear.
In addition
,
plant's
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plant
few
species
are vanishing due to the human activities. To put it in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
words, people are cutting down the trees in a large amount and it causes the
loose
something that is lost
loss
of plant
species
.
For instance
, Africa is considered a continent where the
loose
something that is lost
loss
of plants is the biggest threat due to the deforestation. So that's why citizens should take some steps in
this
issue.
On the other
hand few
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hand, few
people say that there are other nature problems
such
as pollution. It us increasing day by day and it
effects
have an effect upon
affects
our atmosphere in brutal
way
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way, such
such
as people cannot breathe fresh air. Pollution is caused by
number
Suggestion
a number
of vehicles on the road that produces
emmisons
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emissions
. It
cause
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causes
health issues. To illustrate, a recent research carried out by Cambridge University found that pollution is considered the main issue for
environment
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the environment
. In conclusion, after having
disscused
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
discoursed
disclosed
pertinent points, I believe that
loose
something that is lost
loss
of
flaura
all the plant life in a particular region or period
flora
and fauna is the biggest threat to the planet and we should take some measures on it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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