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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is argued that, people should adopt hobbies that require a lot of effort in order to be pleasure for an individual.
This
 essay disagrees with
this
 view and believe that if hobbies are challenging, it will become difficult to follow them and
then
 talk about how
such
 hobbies can have bad impact on human's mind.
To begin
 with, hobbies should not be tough because people will not able to do it because it needs
time
 and
money
.
In other words
, if a hobby is demanding, people will have to spend their precious
time
 on them. Doing a challenging task needs a large amount of
money
 because it is expensive. To illustrate, a recent research carried out by Cambridge University found that demanding hobbies are difficult to pursue because they demand A large quantity of
time
 and
money
 and they are considered a waste of
money
 and
time
. So
thats
Suggestion
that's
 why people should do easy hobbies rather than difficult one's. Another factor to consider is that, tough hobbies have bad effects on
individuals mind
Suggestion
the individual's mind
individual's mind
individual mind
individuals' mind
 because if they start to do challenging task, they will always be in stress. To put it
in other words
, while doing
such
 hobbies, they feel stressed because it requires a lot of efforts. A hobby is an  activity that relaxes our mind, but difficult hobbies create tension. 
For instance
, playing chess is known as the hobby that causes stress because of its
difficult
Suggestion
difficulty
 level. In conclusion, after having discussed pertinent points, I believe that hobbies should not be demanding rather than easy one's.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unique challenge
  • personal growth
  • mastery
  • accomplishment
  • demanding
  • thrill of achievement
  • pastimes
  • fostering
  • sense of community
  • mindfulness
  • stress relief
  • mental break
  • daily stressors
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