School Teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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The personality conformation of our students, including different aspects is affected by dealing with closest
persons mainly
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persons, mainly
, parents and teachers
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
during the school years.
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issue is tremendously obvious, that the beloved, kind and open-minded
teacher
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greatly affects the
perceptual
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perception
and social growth of his students, far more than his parents. Indeed, the
conformational
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age of the students is extremely important. Many habits are settled in the child's behaviour
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. As well, many skills are acquired from his closest
community which
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community, which
includes parents, teachers and
freinds
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
. These aspects could
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long
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longer
with a good shaping
effect but
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effect, but
sometimes lead to disastrous conflicts with bad upcoming consequences. Parents, actually, are the basic programmers of the child's behaviour. Since they are intimately attached to him, together with
the more time
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the most time
more time
spent.
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, because of the rising busy lifestyle nowadays, time became an obstacle rather than a privilege. Sometimes, the
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parents'
behaviour and psychological construction
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affect
their role with their siblings.
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may lead to forward inevitable problems. So,
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the foundation of the child's personality comes from home, it is definitely not enough for development. As for the small community of the
school students
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school, students
,
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I
believe that the model
teacher
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is greatly needed. All of us had a one beloved
teacher
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when we were young, who helped us to face the outer world and to struggle with the inner fears. A kind, caring and
freindly
characteristic of or befitting a friend
friendly
teacher
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always captures the
childrens'
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Childrens'
attention. They keep trying to stay close to him and usually try to impress him. Security and love always succeed to build
strong structure
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a strong structure
strong structures
in one's beliefs. They
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help to upgrade the mind skills as well as the communication confidence. They help students to gain courage, confidence and power to grow and continue.
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leads to the most necessary skill which is creativity. Needless to say that parents surely are responsible for part of the skills acquired by their sons,
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the more impressive effect comes from the outside community. The more effective and secure the round persons were, the more creative and social the students would be.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuances
  • responsibility
  • intellectual development
  • social development
  • structured learning environment
  • curriculum
  • diverse interactions
  • group activities
  • conflict resolution
  • foundational impact
  • core values
  • beliefs
  • attitudes
  • nurturing
  • joint responsibility
  • collaboration
  • continuous dialogue
  • distinct roles
  • underestimate
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