You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what is wrong with the furniture • say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear Mr Johnson, My name is Olakunle Ashade, I am one of your

tenant

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who occupied the 3bed-room flat at No 3, Thomas Benson Street. I moved into the

apartment

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in October

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2018. If you remembered in some months ago I placed a call to you concerning the issue I’m experiencing with the

furniture

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in my

apartment

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. I will like to call your attention to it again as the

furniture

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is not in good condition to use. I have observed that the leather is pilling and the 2 legs

has

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broken. The condition of the

furniture

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is bad that we have condemned it as it is so embarrassing to use when visitors come visiting. I will appreciate

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all the

furniture

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can be replaced with a new one as the agreement we both had was that the

furniture

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to be supplied in the

apartment

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will be new and with a guarantee of 1year. Not only will I appreciate it been replaced

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but,

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can be done within the week as I will be hosting a family party in the

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soon. Thank you. Olakunle Ashade