A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same right as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowhere

Nature

is a good city. There is a very nice

people

Suggestion

person

and nice grounds. Hockey ground, cricket ground and football ground.

there

Suggestion

There

avaiable

obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

available

for

nince

denoting a quantity consisting of one more than eight and one less than ten

nine

nice

education systems and

also

university

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universities

a university

. There

are

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good hospital

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a good hospital

and well

doctors but

Accept comma addition

doctors, but

doctor well treatment of patients. There are nice markets.

For

example cloths

Accept comma addition

example, cloths

markets,

sporta

an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition

sports

spot

market

. They are a

ver

used as an intensifier

very

famous

market

nowshera

the essential qualities or characteristics by which something is recognized

nature

. There

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are

fruit

market

and vegetable

market

. There is a fish

market

This

market

is very famous in

kpk

. People

comes

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come

from all over the

kep

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

keep

cap

kelp

for shopping. There is available a good

parks

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park

. One is

jinnah

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Jinnah

gone

China

park and

kund

strange in an interesting or pleasing way

quaint

condo

park and one is very famous place in

nowshera

the essential qualities or characteristics by which something is recognized

nature

This

mean is "RED BRIDGE". In

nowshera

the essential qualities or characteristics by which something is recognized

nature

that available all things which essential for life. Here is a good police system

also

traffic police.

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Their

people

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are

very good and

hopitility

kindness in welcoming guests or strangers

hospitality

This

place

are

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very peacefull

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also very peaceful

very peaceful also

also

people are

vey

used as an intensifier

very

peacefull

not disturbed by strife or turmoil or war

peaceful

. People

loving

the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities

living

together and

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

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pool

are very

respectfull

full of or exhibiting respect

respectful

people.

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people giving respect of other people.

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is a very good talk about

nowshera

the essential qualities or characteristics by which something is recognized

nature

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also

a good

foot path

a trodden path

footpath

. Clean G.T Road

also

clean foot path. There people are so nice

also

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this

person helped.

This

is a

goodness

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good

people

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person

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the city

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