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With the availability of information on the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days, It is clear that surfing
internet
 is becoming a daily habit for many people. It provides
access
 to a wide range of services like gaming and food ordering. It
also
 provides
access
 to many ebooks for educational purpose making people choose
internet
 over libraries. But what is the most effective place to read books? Some people believe that reading online is very easy. I completely agree with and in
this
 essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly
, with
access
 to the
internet
 people can read
content
 from their home.
For example
, public libraries in India are only based in major cities, compared to
internet
 services in every house. In spite of travelling to major hubs for studying, people often choose their personal phone's or laptop's with
internet
 connection for reading.
Additionally
, it saves time and money for travelling. Another reason why public libraries are not necessary is that they don't have a wide range of books and articles. Only major libraries have
access
 to most of the
content
. But in the
internet
 people can download any book or article from any author belonging to any country.
Moreover
, people often find difficult to maintain extreme silence and discipline in the library premises.
Finally
, Many libraries lack technical
content
 as they concentrate more on art and literature marking the way to digital
content
.
However
, Many people argue that libraries help reduce distraction and improve concentration. They
also
 find turning pages interesting
over
Suggestion
after
 watching mobile. It is true that many online platforms cost a huge amount of money for downloading books. Some libraries
also
 host original manuscripts of old writings which are very rare on the
internet
. In conclusion,
Although
 libraries help improve concentration, they lack in providing useful resources.
Internet
 helps people work from home providing all the
content
 from any academic. People can read or
access
 books any time
instead
 of going to the library. Personally, I believe that public libraries are only used for reading original copies and can be replaced with
internet
.
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