In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Various conflicts are going around the world
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due to which government of many countries
impose
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imposes
sactions
give sanction to
sanctions
on people for their safety.Some people think that government imposed
sactions
give sanction to
sanctions
on young people after dawn is acceptable.
However
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I
disagree the above
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disagree with the above
line of thought
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and
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that infringes the right of
freedom
and better police protection during nights will solve the problem.
To begin
with
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young people should not be bound by
restriction
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the restriction
.Our forefathers have fought long battles so that everyone would live a free life
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If there is no
freedom
,
then
the person will not develop into a mature and fearless
beingand
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being and
perhaps may be
aggresive
having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends
aggressive
to society.To illustrate
this
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many convicts who have been booked for petty crimes, after serving in confinement become more
aggresive
having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends
aggressive
and commit more
henious
extremely wicked, deeply criminal
heinous
crimes later on.
Hence
, it is necessary for teens to be given their own
freedom
.
Furthermore
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People of young ages
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particulary
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
particularly
teens are adventurous in
nature
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nature, hence
hence
will venture out at night without permission of their
gaurdains
a plot of ground where plants are cultivated
gardens
guardians
garden
.Our modern society should understand their nature and should have tight patrols in nights for their protection
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since there might be some time that a kid would be in
unfavorable situation
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unfavourable situations
unfavourable situation
an unfavourable situation
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For example
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one of my cousin's
kid
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kids
went out at night for a party with his friend
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but while coming back to
home
that male; objective male pronoun
him
he fell into a ditch.Since his leg got hurt, he could not
comeout
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come out
.
but
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But
fortunately a patrolling policeman heard his cry and saved him from
ditch
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the ditch
a ditch
.So, it is necessary to have proper police protection
inspite
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in spite
of
curfew
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the curfew
. In a nutshell
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a curfew is not needed in
developed
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developing
society
such
as America.To encourage maturity and fearlessness young ones should be given
freedom
toexplore
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to explore
and enjoy their lives.And for their
proctection
the activity of protecting someone or something
protection
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a proper police function at nights is required.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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