Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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GM
products have been at the
center
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of a global debate for several years. Some people claim that the genetic engineering of food products brings many advantages.
This
essay deals with arguments for and against
this
controversial issue. Those people who are in
favor
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of
this
method of production argue that food production can be massively increased by making crops more resistant to pests.
Secondly
, they believe that food can be improved by adding vitamins or removing problem genes that lead to allergies,
for example
in peanuts. Fruit and vegetables can
also
last
much longer if the gene that ripens them is modified.
This
means that they can be stored for much longer periods and so there will be less waste.
However
. people who oppose the widespread use of
GM
techniques worry that there could be long-term negative effects. They are concerned that so far the
GM
industry has not been able to prove that they are safe. The issue is not only how safe
such
foods are for humans, but
also
what long-term effects they may have on the environment and wildlife populations.
For instance
, there is some evidence to suggest that
GM
crops may contaminate nearby plants. In conclusion, I tend to agree with these concerns. I think that while there may be obvious benefits to
GM
crops, overall, they present more potential dangers. Their impact could be so large and so irreversible that more long-term studies should be carried out before their use spreads any
further
.
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