Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Nowadays, some portion of society
believe
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believes
that publicity of different products that are daily needs of
general public
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the general public
are not essential.
Although
product publicity
have
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has
less attraction of people, it significantly utters about the items about its quality and quantity in brief. In
this
essay I am going to discuss both the viewpoint and provide my own opinion. As we are living in an era of advanced technology like the other aspect of life, the way of shopping has changed. Today, most of the people are dependent on online shopping through the internet or telephone calls.
For example
, a recent survey in developed countries shows that 55% people love to purchase their things from online stores like amazon, ebay, Alibaba etc.
However
, to attain these
products customer
Accept comma addition
products, customer
need
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needs
to know about it and the social networks as well as televisions disseminate the information about certain products.
Also
, they provide guidance to purchase their items through their medium and asked their customer how they have been informed about their products, so that they know how their customers are
attracting
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attracted
by which medium of their advertisements. From the other side, more people
have complain
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have complained
that they often bluffed by these organizations and their product promotion policy by purchasing things that are actually not needed or being damaged before use.
Moreover
, during working on
web
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the web
or browsing in
social network
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social networks
a social network
, they unnecessarily advertise about things that most people have no interest at all.
For instance
, during watching
Youtube
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YouTube
videos or enjoying movie
in
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on
a television, advertisement interrupt right in the moment of suspense where the audience is deeply concentrated.
However
, it
also
makes the duration longer by displaying more advertisements into the segment of the show. In conclusion, advertisements
is
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are
essential when we need to judge
quality
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the quality
and quantity of the product before buying as there is competitors who offers the same item in
same amount
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the same amount
of prices. But the companies should limit their branding and make it shortened that would might help them to satisfy both the buyer and the seller.
Submitted by maxman016 on

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