Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

we
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We
are all living in a socialistic
society
and
inorder
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in order
to live there, we must all be accepted by the
society
so
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we should bring up ourselves like that
.
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Some of the people think
its
it is
it's
the
parents
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parents'
parent's
responsibility
to make their children
good
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better
members of the
society but
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society, but
others believe it is the
schools
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school's
responsibility
. In my
opinion both
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opinion, both
parents and school
is
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are
responsible because they play a great role in a child.When a child is born onwards his/her parents are there
first
teachers so
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firstly
its the parents
responsibility
to make their children goos members of the
society
.
Childrens
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Children
will always copy the same what
there
of them or themselves
their
parents do
for example
if your
mom
always shout at your dad
then
the kid will
also
do the same.All kids will grow and behave in the way how they are brought up.So
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all parents must inculcate many values
such
as respect
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kindness
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love
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trust
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truthfullness
the quality of being truthful
truthfulness
etc.
Secondly
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its the schools or
teachers
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teacher's
teachers'
responsibility
to make the children
good
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better
members of the
society
.After reaching the age of 3 or 4 most of the kids spend longest hours of
there
of them or themselves
their
time in
schools
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schools, therefore
therefore
with education teachers must teach many moral values too.It is said "
matha
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Matha
mate
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pitha
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guru
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deviam
"so
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teachers are our
second
parents so, it is
there
of them or themselves
their
responsibility
too.Teachers must always build a socially acceptable person
instead
of making them doctors or engineer because there personality matters
first
. Overall
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it is both parents and
teachers
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teacher's
teachers'
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
to shape a better person for tomorrow.So
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lets
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let's
not blame anybody because both these factors are the building blocks of a student life
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they influence them
alot
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a lot
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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