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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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There is a variation among people's view that some think, social media could be a great way to convey the project and a vision of the UN, while others think that it would be a worse
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. I would agree that sharing information through social media would be worthwhile. Today, more than 5 billion people are connected through social media and most of applications in the social media are made only to express the
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 and take feedback from the people. Nowadays, there is approximately 5.5 billion people use social media everyday.
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 number will grow in the future, which implies that more number of people will be connected with the social media. If information or message is sent in the social media, it will be seen and understand by most of the people, they will know what is the main goal of the UN upcoming missions.
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, since the technology is growing so fast, lots of various applications have been developed like: news applications, public feedback applications. The main purpose of these applications is to make people understand the news and information about the projects, which the government, a company and the UN are going to develop.
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, there are some feedback options through which people can express their likes and dislikes about
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. In conclusion,
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 some people are against using the social media by the UN to deliver their thoughts, some people think that it would be a wonderful
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 to use the social media and I
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 believe that if there is a medium through which a message or
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 can be easily processed, we should use that medium.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online marketplaces
  • mobile payment options
  • personalized advertising
  • accessibility
  • compare prices
  • decision fatigue
  • impulse buying
  • financial imprudence
  • privacy and data security
  • transformed
  • streamlined
  • user-friendly
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