The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays,
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obile phones have become an essential in everyone’s life, be it a student or a professional. With the advancements in technology and increase of features in the device the usage of the phones has
also
increased. Some people think that
this
is positive while others say that it has negative impacts on oneself. In
this
essay I am going to discuss both advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones.
One
of the biggest advantages of mobile phone is that it has a thousand different things compiled in a single handheld device. From starting off ones day it is an alarm clock, a calendar, a newspaper to read news from all around the
world
, ones personal assistant or a manager. In
this
fast paced
w
orld it
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world, it
is important that
one
has everything at
one
place. Mobile phones have
also
changed the ways in which people communicate i
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IE
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Now people are available at all times and it s
i
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
easier to reach someone in case of emergency. People now are more connected,
for example
family members living in different countries can now communicate with each other in a much faster and a more efficient way. Unlike in previous times when people used to write letters or call on landline phones which was a tedious and expensive method. Applications like Facetime and S
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have now not only made calling f
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free, but
people can
also
video chat with their loved ones.
Moreover
, mobile phones have
also
changed the way businesses are done. Entrepreneurs can now run their business on the go, they can be in contact with their team or client through mobile applications like Slack. In contrary to a
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the advantages
of mobile p
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phones, there
are several disadvantages a
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as well
Firstly
, where mobile phones connect people far away, it
also
disconnects people from the
one
physically present.
For instance
, a family sitting in the living room might not talk to each other about their d
ay whereas
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day, whereas
would be telling it to the
world
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of
social media. The people are now virtually connected and physically disconnected. Another disadvantage is that the usage of phones is a cause of several medical conditions. Researchers believe that excessive screen time slows down
one
's cognitive functions. It increases d
ependence
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depending
depends
depend
on the device more, weakening
one
's brain cells. Mobile phone usage is
one
of the biggest reasons behind insomnia in young people. The rays from the mobile screens are
also
considered to be very harmful for
one
’s eyes. Taking into account all the advantages and disadvantages of mobile p
hones excessive
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phones, excessive
use, I believe that the advantages still outweigh the disadvantages. Mobile phones are the need of today’s
world
and it benefits us in our personal and professional life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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