Some people think that children should attend extra classes outside the school others say that they should be allowed some time to play . discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present world, many parents want their children to excel in any other activity like dancing or painting

etc

, apart from the school curriculum. People think these

activities manage

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activities, manage

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kids'

time efficiently, but what is the effective way for the children to spend their time after the school? Some believe that kids should be allowed to play,

instead

of attending any extra classes. I completely agree with

this

point and in

this

essay, I will support my opinions with examples.

Firstly

, after attending many classes in the school, children often get stressed out.

For example

, normal schools in India starts at 9

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.M in the morning and ends at 5 P.M in the evening,

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the kids

are only left with 3 hours, before getting to sleep.

Moreover

, they usually have homeworks to be done for

next

day classes.

In addition

to

this

, leaving alone kids play in the evenings, increases their metabolism and health. What I mean by

this

is that, pupils are happy when they interact with their friends in the park.

Finally

, if parents encourage their children to play, they have a chance to learn and develop many skills on their own.

pupils

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Pupils

who find themselves happy contribute more to daily activities. Turning on the other side of

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the argument

an argument

, Many parents have busy schedules

through out

all the way through

throughout

the

day which

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day, which

makes their children join these extra classes. They

also

think that their minors misbehave, in

absence

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the absence

of their presence.

Furthermore

, it is true that youngsters play dangerously, when they know that there is no one to ask them.

Additionally

, many believe that attending or following any other activity apart from studies make their minors participate in external events.

Also

, many youngsters don't listen to their parents,

this

lack of discipline towards elders make people look for extra classes. To sum up,

although

it is evident that minors learn something from additional classes, it is very good to

leave them play

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leave them to play

with friends. Elders need to manage their time for pupils, as they can

also

choose these activities during weekends or holidays. Personally, I believe that leaving kids play, help them maintain good health and social awareness.