In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for men and women to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It

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, logical for men and women to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In most nations, an increasing number of couples have started working equally.

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, it is natural that, they both share domestic chores among themselves. I strongly agree with the phenomenon above, as

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way of living present several benefits,

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as stress free life and courage to be self-dependent.

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, sharing domestic chores

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, mainly to reduce

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pressure

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on couples. If only one of them has to do all the

work

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alone after long hours of office

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, they will be under tremendous

pressure

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. Eventually, the person who does all the

work

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will have no option but to quit their job. Since

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will help make time for household chores without much stress.

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can bring about feelings of resentment.

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, sharing domestic works, enables both

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spouses

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have

a flourishing career and stress free family life.

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recent study

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a recent study

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reveals that, 60% of couples without

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lives longer.

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, dividing household chores, help both men and women to be independent

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is because, each partner

learn

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learns

basic skills on how to do almost every

work

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at home, and can run the house independently when the other is out of town.

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, business men and women benefit from

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phenomenon because their job

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requires

them to travel frequently, leaving their families. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the opinion that

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busy working couple should share their domestic duties because, it will help them reduce the workload and it associated

pressure

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, it enables them to be independent when they are alone.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

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285 words

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In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for men and women to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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