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Some people believe that teachers have an important role to play in the educational success, while others think it is the students' attitude that matters. Discuss both views and share your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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In general, teachers are spending more time with the students than their parents. Some people believe that faculties have a vital role to play for academic success, whereas others think that the
student
's attitude makes a difference in respect to the outcome.
This
 essay will discuss both points of view. On the one hand, the teachers are the one who guides their students in an appropriate
way
 to succeed in
life
. They were not only has a responsibility to teach subjects, but
also
 to give the knowledge of
life
's lessons.
For instance
, men or women can achieve their success only when they have guided properly and that can be done only with the help of the faculty. So, the educator has a significant role to create a
student
 with all good moral values.
Furthermore
, the teachers should put more effort to bring the
tutees
a heading that names a statute or legislative bill; may give a brief summary of the matters it deals with
titles
tastes
turtles
 to learn their subjects and make them feel easy to study.
This
way
 makes the
student
 graduate and structures their future with knowledge.
On the other hand
, the
student
's behaviour plays a vital role to acquire knowledge from anybody. Whenever the
tutee
a written agreement between two states or sovereigns
treaty
tort
total
 is not accepting a command from the faculty, it is represented that
this
 person is getting away from the right
way
.
Moreover
, if a person gets a degree, they cannot sustain in a workplace with
this
 attitude. The students should understand that the elder words come from their experience, so they have to try the footpaths of them to get succeed in
life
 without any obstacles. In conclusion,
although
 the
student
's education
life
 depends upon their attitude, I would argue that the teachers should need responsibilities to get the students in a right
way
 with the repeated effort to make him/her a better person in the society.
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