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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is a debate going on, whether the
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 should finance private education institute or not. In my opinion, it is not the
government
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's responsibility to support the private schools. In
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 essay we will discuss on why academic fund should be limited to the public schools only.
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, admission fees in the private schools are much higher compared to the
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school
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.
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, parents are spending extra on
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 type of schools so that their children can participate in other activities.
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, there are extra charges for the students to be a part of a basketball team after
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 where they are given proper training on the same.
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, public schools are totally dependent on limited
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 funding and in
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 if there is a share, it would become difficult to provide good education to the students.
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, the number of students in a public
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 is more as compared to the private
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 as it is difficult for the lower financial class people to afford the higher fees.
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, with the limited financial aid from the
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, it will be difficult for academic administrators to recruit certified teachers for their schools and meet their higher wage expectations.
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, the professors in public
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 are very demanding in terms of money as they have more number of students to teach and have to work hard when compared to private
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. Whereas in private
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, the law does not apply and they can hire teachers who are not certified and have lower payroll In conclusion, entire society should be treated equally by the law.
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, when it comes to education, the private schools are catering to higher class people and
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 they are financially well equipped..
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, the
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 should give priority to the public
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 in regards to the funding.
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