You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Dear Lei,
I came across the advertisement that I saw in our University for cooking classes. I thought of enrolling for the workshop
this
summer and I want to invite you to come with me.
The class will be held in the new building of our Uni. I heard that they have state of the art
facilities so It'll be fun and exciting.
I thought you might be interested Add a hyphen
state-of-the-art
to join
me since we both need to learn Change preposition
in joining
this
kind of skill. It'll also
serve as a bonding for us since we never bond
for decades Wrong verb form
bonded
due to
our busy schedules.
I want to meet you in the cafeteria this
lunch if you are free, so we can talk about everything in detail.
I hope that you'll be keen to attend this
new learning as well and I can't wait to learn that skill with you. See you soon.
Take care,
JaneSubmitted by bautista.shen on
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Consider using more varied sentence structures to make your writing more engaging.
task achievement
Incorporate more specific details about the cooking class, such as what type of cuisine might be taught, to make your argument more compelling.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-organized and clearly structured, making it easy to follow.
task achievement
You've done a great job expressing enthusiasm and giving personal reasons for both you and your friend to be interested in the class.