The Average Standard of People's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to changes in the lifestyles of individuals and
communties
a group of people living in a particular local area
communities
, a pessimistic view on the overall futuristic
health
levels is generally adopted nowadays. In my opinion, I think that the standard definition of a healthy person will indeed decline over the years, where a person of poor
health
in the present might be considered a relatively healthy individual in the future.
Firstly
, I believe that one of the main causes of lower
health
expectancy is the rise of mental illnesses in recent years. It is almost customary now that everyone knows a friend or a relative who is suffering from a mental condition,
such
as depression or anxiety disorders, which is usually associated with the stress imposed through work and education. In fact, recent research shows that about 20% of people living in western countries reported that they struggle with one or more anxiety disorders, as opposed to very
lower
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low
percentages recorded in the past decades.
Conseqeuntly
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Consequently
, physical
health
is affected by the decline in mental
health
, where general
symtopms
(medicine) any sensation or change in bodily function that is experienced by a patient and is associated with a particular disease
symptoms
of mental illnesses include: insomnia, memory loss, heart problems, and
last
but not least, skin damage.
Therefore
, it is almost obvious that the degradation of mental
health
will contribute to the overall lowering of
health
standard in the future.
Furthermore
, the changes experienced in work environments have forced people to change their lifestyle to a relatively less healthy one. Long work hours have left people with almost no time to cook their own meals.
a
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A
trend that
have resulted
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has resulted
in a major change in dietary habits,
infulenced
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influenced
by takeout and convenience foods, which are well known to be full of preservatives and sugars and are basically not
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so
nutritious as home-cooked meals.
In addition
, the changes to the environment
such
as air and water pollution
also contributes
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also contribute
to the worsening of people's
healtth
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
.
For example
,
water-borne
transported by water
waterborne
dieseses
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
are on the rise in developing countries and there has been no actions introduced to improve the quality of water consumed. To sum up, I believe that if
health
standards are to be improved in the future, major
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
changes have to be made to the environment and to the lifestyles of individuals in the present.
Otherwise
,
health
standards could only get worse from
this
stage.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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