Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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it is commonly said among certain individuals that the prime aim of learning international

language

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is for work or better still to travel. Others

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however

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belief

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believe

believes

believed

that the purpose for

learning it goes

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learning as it goes

beyond these two reasons.

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essay will discuss both sides and

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state my view.

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, due to the advent of technology and

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the century where we live, we cannot afford to remain in our home country without visiting other countries. People that take up a job or travel to other nations need to learn their

language

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so as to Foster good relation and to make their lives easy.

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, the majority of Hausa people in Nigeria do not understand any other

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expect

take exception to

except

Hausa. In order for

foreigners

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foreigners'

foreigner

lives to be easy, learning their

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will be

additional benefit

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an additional benefit

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will result in smooth trade, good negotiation skills and conservation of money for the visitors.

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to the above reasons, people

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master other languages for diplomacy. I could remember in 2013 when one of the Kings in Arabic nation visited Nigeria, the government looked for a Nigerian that was

skillful

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in Arabic

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for interpretation from English to Arabic

language

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has resulted in smooth communication and understanding between the two leaders.

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inter-racial

between races

interracial

marriage is one of the reasons why people have knowledge of another

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, if you are interested in a lady

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not from your race, you have to learn her

language

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, it is now a commonplace for Nigerians to marry from

United States

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the United States

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this

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marriage), they have to understand their

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. In conclusion, while some people learn a

language

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to earn a living or to travel and others for

entirely different purpose

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an entirely different purpose

entirely different purposes

. On balance, I believe the sole aim of learning an international

language

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should be individualised rather than generalised.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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312 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

multilingual
linguistic proficiency
globalized world
cross-cultural communication
immersive experience
adaptability
cultural exchange
interpersonal skills
employment prospects
empathy
intellectual development
overcome language barriers
global market
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