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Some people think that natural talent is important to successful in sports. Other thinks hard work and practice are more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Although
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 it is sometimes thought by a number of people that to achieve
success
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 in
games
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game
one
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 should
born
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bear
 with natural talent, some believe that without hard
work
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 and
practice
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 no
one
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 can get
success
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. In my opinion, I believe that,
acquiring
giving confidence
assuring
success
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 only depends on
one
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's dedicated hard
work
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 and immense
practice
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. According to
one
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 portion of population, natural capabilities play an important role to become successful in sports. They believe that if a person will
born
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bear
 with few qualities
such
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 as good in running and jumping can become a successful runner or jumper.
Moreover
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, they think that if anyone who has certain
capabilities
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capabilities, then
then
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 without doing
hardwork
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hard work
 he or she can achieve a name or fame in the sports industry. To
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
, there was an article in the "Times of India" during November month
this
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 year, almost 52% population parked their opinion that to become a famous
athelet
a person trained to compete in sports
athlete
 or
sport person
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support one person
support person one
one
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 should have natural abilities.
On the other hand
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, some people believe that without sufficient hard
work
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 and regular
practice
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one
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 can not get
success
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. According to them, whatever talent you have, you should
practice
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 hard to come on top level.
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, any talent, which comes naturally will no longer sustain, until you polish it or make it more robust. Somehow, I
also
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 believe that any quality will not persist if do not use yourself to do
hard
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the hard work
work
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.
For Instance
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, P V Sindhu, who is an Indian badminton player, got
this
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 name and fame only after her dedicated
work
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 and regular
practice
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. In conclusion, for some people natural abilities are more important to become successful in sports, while others have their
belief
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beliefs
, that hard
work
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 can make anyone successful. Somewhere, I
also
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 fall in
later category
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the latter category
the later category
, who think that any normal person can become successful with hard
work
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.

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