In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that there has been a rise in count of parents who educate their young ones themselves at home

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of educating them in colleges.

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essay argues that disadvantages of

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outweigh the advantages because of the serious issues it can cause.

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discuss

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lack of exposure, lack of updates as the disadvantages and

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brings saving

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as the one of the

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advantages

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, if youngsters are trained by their parents

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children may lack face to face interaction with others.

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is because

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is a place where one can interact with different kind of children and staff members so the child may not feel difficulty in starting a conversation with a stranger.

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, it gives the opportunity to create good friends.

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, the teachers in a

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are highly trained. They keep themselves updated with subject knowledge and they know in what way to teach so that the student can easily understand.

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is not the same in case of parents who educate their children. Even the child may get bored by a continuous long teaching from his elderly ones. Now a day's fee in

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has become a serious problem. Many parents cannot afford the high tuition fee demanded by the

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. If parents had the enough subject knowledge and potential to develop their kids

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can save a lot of

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saved

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can be used for

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purposes. Some of the parents are teachers and they have the ability to uplift their heir. To illustrate

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, a man named 'Rahul' who was disabled had got admitted in the most reputed institution IIT MUMBAI by pursuing training from his parents who cannot afford for his primary education and training, whereas the students who spent a lot of

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for getting trained in a standard institute have not gotten admission. In conclusion, on the fact that without the peer to peer exposure it is difficult for any individual to survive so the disadvantages stand strong and clearly destroys the advantages. Even though there are some advantages but the disadvantages are innumerous and critical.

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the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantages.