The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

Every year governments allocate a large portion of the budget to the

health

Use synonyms

department to provide better

treatment

Use synonyms

facilities to the public.

However

Linking Words

, some diseases can be prevented if people take some measurement. In my opinion,

government

Use synonyms

priority should be the

treatment

Use synonyms

of

public but

Accept comma addition

public, but

cannot ignore the prevention of

health

Use synonyms

problems.

First

Linking Words

of all, every year, scientists and researchers discover new diseases and viruses, some diseases can easily transmit from animals to human. Some diseases need proper

treatment

Use synonyms

and medicine once they diagnosed,

for instance

Linking Words

, HIV and Cancer which need high levels of medication and a person cannot afford it without

government

Use synonyms

support. So

treatment

Use synonyms

and medicine should be the top priority of the

government

Use synonyms

.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, some diseases and viruses can easily tickle if the

government

Use synonyms

takes some initiatives about spreading awareness in the public. In daily life before eating anything people should wash their hands, they can use Sanitiser in working place. In the past, there were few diseases which

were life threatening to

Suggestion

were life threatening

human

health

Use synonyms

, but with the

government

Use synonyms

help it is almost disappeared,

For example

Linking Words

, the Pakistan

government

Use synonyms

started a campaign about polio virus and eventually it reduced to 2%, same happened in India the

government

Use synonyms

launched a campaign against cigarette smoking in all the train station and bus station to stop people from smoking which can cause lung cancer and

this

Linking Words

campaign was fruitful. To conclude, the

government

Use synonyms

should continue the funding to

Use synonyms

health sector

Suggestion

the health sector

, but at the same time spread awareness about preventing

health

Use synonyms

problems and illnesses.