Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?

I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the delay in the delivery of a
book
. I ordered “12 Rules of Life” from your official website www.
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Staples
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com
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and my order number: ABCD3334 on the 12th of August. As I paid for the express delivery, I was supposed to receive it by 12th of August;
however
, it has been delayed by 2 days now. The
book
was a birthday present to my close friend, he is a great fan of
this
book
. He is going to celebrate his birthday by tomorrow and I would like to present
this
on the same day in person. But
this
delay has put my plan in risk. In
this
situation, I would like to suggest an idea which works better for us. You have a store in my city and I saw a display copy of
this
book
there,
however
, the manager didn’t agree to sell that as it was a display piece. I would really appreciate, if you could phone the manager and let me purchase the copy, so that I can have the
book
by
this
evening. I look forward to a satisfactory reply from your end.

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