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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are the advantages more than disadvantages of such services.

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In
this
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people use a myriad of applications to translate language online. There is always an ongoing debate whether
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 softwares are a bane or a boon to mankind. In my opinion
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these utilities can boost tourism sector by providing effective communication and aid in getting employed.
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, when tourists visit another nation
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then
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 there is always a cultural difference and they find it quite hard to interact with the locals of that place.
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 applications that can convert
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 language to another come to rescue.To exemplify
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when I went to Turkey
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 year
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there was a communication barrier at
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But when
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 used Google translator
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i
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 was relieved.
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 app is handy and very convenient to use.
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Also, using
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 softwares can support job aspirants when they are working outside their native country. For an instance
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knowledge of French is must if
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 wants to get employed in Montreal
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a Canadian province.
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, if technology is used to overcome linguistic barriers
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 can even lead to unemployment of people who are working as translators in various firms and organisations Thereby
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affecting
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's career and finances.For an instance
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my maternal uncle was fired from his job after the use of artificial intelligence programs converting any language to the native
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. To conclude, though
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there are some minor drawbacks of using these apps
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but they certainly empower tourism industry and employment.
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