There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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Kinds of
music
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people
listen
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are listening
nowadays are of different tastes and types.
For instance
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, modern international pop and rap
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, as well as
classical
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classic
traditional
country
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songs all, vary from each other and people listen to them with great interests.
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is because
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has been
part
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of our daily
lives even
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life, even
life even
in the ancient times. In
this
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essay, reasons on why
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is necessary for every Filipino people and the importance of the Philippine traditional folk
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over foreign songs that young Filipinos and Filipinas always hear will be discussed.
Music
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is a vital
part
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of every Filipinos' lives.
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, Philippine folks considered it to be one of the most popular and ancient modes of human expressions. It features largely in all histories and all cultures and indeed has been one of the main ways of passing on cultural traditions to new generations of the
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.
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, because of
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, many people view
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as a positive influence for the societies.
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influence on individuals is wholly beneficial as it is a long-established way of communicating and helping us understand the whole range of human emotion and experience in a more spiritual language than words can represent.
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, the classical
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traditions of the Philippines are not necessarily
part
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of the
music
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many Filipinos and Filipinas experience today. In the modern world today, most of the
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's young people constantly exposed themselves to loud modern foreign songs
as a result
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of globalisation via the Internet. But I think that it is more important for young people of the
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to learn
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learn
traditional
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to enable them to know the origins of our Philippine ancestors. In conclusion, I think that we need traditional
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because it is an integral
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of the human expression that we cannot really separate from our lives even if there are the various
evolution
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evolutions
of modern
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we tend to listen every day through the web nowadays
such
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as American rap songs and Korean pop
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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