Some people think that hardworking and determination are the key factors for being successful in life. Other people feel that other factors are important.  Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People's opinions differ as to the main determinants of  success. While some opine that

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hard work

and being focused a

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is

the major determinants, others believe that  some o

thers

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

things

such

as family

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ackground and

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background, and

destiny

also

determine to some extent, how successful

one

can be. In my opinion, 

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hard work

and determination are highly necessary for a successful life,

however

,  family

background

and destiny

also

play contributory roles.  On the

one

hand,

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hard work

and determination k

eeps

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keep

an individual focused.

This

means that someone that works really hard, and is

also

determined cannot be e

asy

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easily

distracted with trivial issues.

In addition

, it

also

improves skills and efficiency.

This

is because much attention is given to the work,

hence

, tremendous result will be achieved. 

For example

, Cristiano Ronaldo,  a popular footballer is said to spend an average of 14 hours every day during his training sessions on the pitch.

As a result

,

this

display of diligence and drive has secured him an enviable position of

one

of the best footballers in the world.

On the other hand

, it is

also

argued that other factors

also

contribute to prosperity in life.

One

of

such

is the family

background

.

In other words

, the family

one

comes p

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to play

a crucial role in his life.

This

is to say that someone from a wealthy

background

may likely succeed more than his counterpart from a poor upbringing. 

This

can be attributed to the major financial and educational foundation gotten from the parents.

Furthermore

,  destiny is

also

a major determinant of how successful

one

can be. It is believed that a person's major a

chievements

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achievement

is likely embedded in his fate.

Consequently

,  present actions may likely not interfere with f

uture result.

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the future result

future results

In conclusion,  despite people's varying views, I believe that

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ardwork

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hard work

and  determination are the main elements of success.

However

, family

background

and

one

's fate are equally important.