In some societies, the number of crime committed by teenager is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crime should receive adult punishment. To what extend do you agree?

Crime has been an issue in many countries and the rate of misconduct

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

caused by juveniles

are rising

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is rising

in some societies. Owing to the problem, some people think that adolescents who conduct serious crime should be judged like adults. I partially disagree with

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point of view.

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and foremost, strict punishments that are usually used for mature people can be applied

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to

teenagers.

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some sentences are too harsh, or even too draconian, they are still effective in distributing fear among people, especially youngsters.

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, obedience to laws would gradually be created.

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, if a 16

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year

old boy who committed an intense killing scene was convicted with a death sentence,

other boys

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the other boys

and girls would be afraid of the consequence

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, they would be less likely to conduct the similar wrong doing.

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, despite being applicable to juveniles, adult punishments are not the optimal methods.

Teenager's mentality

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The teenager's mentality

is not fully grown so they are easily affected by exterior factors that motivate crimes.

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,

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of arbitrating them like adults, sending them to reformatory facilities to re-educate would be a more efficient way. With

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method, youngsters could profoundly realize their

wrong doings

departure from what is ethically acceptable

wrongdoings

and rehabilitate as decent civilians.

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,

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solution would be

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seem

to be more ethical by citizens and it could generate respect

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of fear, which would be brought by using strict punishments. In conclusion, there is an increase in the number of crimes made by youngsters. While some people suppose that criminals who are even really young should receive adult punishments, I partially oppose to

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idea.

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adult punishments can definitely be used for teenagers,

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essay showed that compared to education, these punishments are not the effective solutions