Nowadays many people spend less and less time at home what are the cause of this .what are the effects of this on individuals society

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Home

is a place where we can chill, take a rest and spend the

time

with family members

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but at present a lot of people spend most of their

time

outside their

home

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There are many

cause

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causes

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This

essay shall delve into

reasons

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the reasons

and effects

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To commence with, many people spend their

time

outside their

home

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most

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Most

of people as a worker

employes

having your services engaged for; or having a job especially one that pays wages or a salary

employed

they

objective case of they

them

all busy own their work.

For

example many

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example, many

workers spend their

time

to office work. They spend 8 to 10 hours daily.

Then

they 're going back to

home

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the home

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many

Suggestion

Many

time

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times

they trapped in traffic

jam approximately

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jam, approximately

four to five hours

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when

Suggestion

When

they reached the

home

they are so tired and they

not talk

Suggestion

don't talk

with family members

Sat Sep 14 2019

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

124 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Nowadays many people spend less and less time at home what are the cause of this .what are the effects of this on individuals society

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Nowadays the difference between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same Tv shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands

Films can have an effect on children's education and teach them many things. Do you think it is always a positive influence?

While travelling by metro train, your credit card slipped out of your pocket. You realized this only after reaching home. Write a letter to the concerned authorities and explain what happened.

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