Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is a positive or negative development?

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Currently

airplane

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tickets are becoming cheaper and cheaper due to high availability of flights all around the

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, according to some

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is going to change in the future because of the reduction of

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particular travelling method. In my opinion, I believe

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development has more drawbacks than benefits. The growth in

airline indsutry

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the airline industry

airline industry

has contributed to the improvement in

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the tourism field

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of countries. Many developing nations depend on tourism nowadays. One of their main incomes is foreign exchange bought by holiday makers.

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, controlling the

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travel

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will impact the economies of these countries enormously.

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, most people in recent times prefer to visit the other areas of the

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, and would like to experience various cultures and customs of different nations.

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, due to

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globalization, family

members of modern families are employed in separate parts of the

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trend will affect their relationships as well.

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, the business sector has gained significant development since

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decade. One of the primary reasons for

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improvement is the availability of

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travel

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, in recent times, products from all around the

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are

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starting

to appear in our local supermarkets.

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is because the reduced transportation time and cost.

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, most of these gods are now transporting via

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, considering the

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economic

damage,

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this

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trend would not provide

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a better outcome

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for

the future of the

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. In conclusion, cut backs of

air

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travel

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will result in

downfall

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the downfall

of many industries

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as tourism.

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, it would affect the business sector of the

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, reduction of

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travel

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will not be a positive development for the future

world

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