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When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance.To what extent do you agree?

It is a controversial issue as to whether people would focus on the
design
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 of, construction of the inner structure of the building, or, whether they should concentrate on the exterior beauty. From my perspective, I completely agree that building should be structured, accurate
design
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 which would fulfil the
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 of that house
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 of emphasizing its outlook.
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 with, when people
design
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 a building, they think, at
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, its outward
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. The reason is that the outstanding architectural
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 outside enhances the status, and differentiates the
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 of building the monument.
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, studies have shown that commercial spaces
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 as shopping malls are spectacular to look at which serves the motive not only to get more customers but
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 to earn more profit.
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 that, people could easily come to know at a glance what is the goal of the owner behind designing the building magnificently.
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, the object that a building designer chooses regarding outward appearance, is worthwhile.
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, most of the designers have the significant
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 of constructing a building that would serve the
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 of the owners.
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 is because if the entrepreneur buys any office which is unable to serve the
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,
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, the space is neither measured correctly to make room for employers, nor the position of all spaces executes the
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,
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 as the kitchen is smaller than the bathroom, or there is no space for Godown, it will be useless for the owner to purchase it. The interior structure has a great significance regardless of the exterior beautiful outlook. In conclusion, if the constructor constructs a building, he must think of its inner structure to manage all the tasks, which should be the main aim, I would think, of a builder, despite giving the importance on the magnificence of the building.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • user experience
  • ergonomic
  • productivity
  • safety standards
  • building codes
  • emergency exits
  • ventilation
  • accessibility features
  • sustainability
  • energy-efficient
  • flexibility
  • adaptability
  • multifunctional
  • regulations
  • operational costs
  • environmental impact
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