Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Nowadays, with the pace

in

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with

of

technology, commercialisation of products

is

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has also gradually increased

also gradually increases

also

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gradually increase. Actually, it is a way to draw the attention of people to the

product

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, so that

company

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the company

can make profit. Todays many

company

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companies

use different techniques for advertisement, which is not

accpected

considered likely or probable to happen or arrive

expected

by

society

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and leads to

social issue

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a social issue

social issues

. I agree with given statement and

this

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essay will discuss various reasons with

example

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examples

an example

. The major

eim

point or cause to go (blows, weapons, or objects such as photographic equipment) towards

aim

aims

of commercialisation of

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product

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the product

products

is to captivate the

interset

a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something

interest

interests

of the people. To

accomplished

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accomplish

this

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,

firslty

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agency used the method that hearts the feelings of the communities,

as a result

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people appose that

compaines

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company's

companies

products.

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, some agency uses various

animal

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animals

in the products, that adversely impact the

regilous

concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church

religious

of the peoples

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,

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,

companies have to face

agressiveness

the quality of being bold and enterprising

aggressiveness

of the

commumities

a group of people living in a particular local area

communities

.

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Secondly many

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Secondly, many

corrpurations

a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state

corporations

just try to show positive and effective sides of the

product

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.

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, they do not illustrate other dark side of the item.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, the greed of profit

tend

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tends

companies to use

illleagel

prohibited by law or by official or accepted rules

illegal

and unethical method to

adevertise

call attention to

advertise

to

product

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, which affect the societies various

aspectes

a distinct feature or element in a problem

aspects

respects

To

conclude i

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conclude, I

conclude I

believe that some companies use to increase the sale of

product

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without

consideration

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a consideration

of

eticial

of or relating to or involving light or optics

optical

values in the

society

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, but commercialisation

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also benifit

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also benefits

also benefit

has also benefited

has also benefitted

is also benefiting

the

society

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to choose best.

but

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But

issue

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the issue

can be

ilminated

terminate, end, or take out

eliminated

illuminated

if

compant

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the company

company

a company

complaint

should follow the ethics of the

society

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