Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Nowadays, with the pace
in
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with
of
technology, commercialisation of products
is
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has also gradually increased
also gradually increases
also
gradually increase. Actually, it is a way to draw the attention of people to the
product
, so that
company
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the company
can make profit. Todays many
company
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companies
use different techniques for advertisement, which is not
accpected
considered likely or probable to happen or arrive
expected
by
society
and leads to
social issue
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a social issue
social issues
. I agree with given statement and
this
essay will discuss various reasons with
example
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examples
an example
. The major
eim
point or cause to go (blows, weapons, or objects such as photographic equipment) towards
aim
aims
of commercialisation of
product
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the product
products
is to captivate the
interset
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
of the people. To
accomplished
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accomplish
this
,
firslty
agency used the method that hearts the feelings of the communities,
as a result
people appose that
compaines
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company's
companies
products.
For instance
, some agency uses various
animal
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animals
in the products, that adversely impact the
regilous
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
religious
of the peoples
as a result
,
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,
companies have to face
agressiveness
the quality of being bold and enterprising
aggressiveness
of the
commumities
a group of people living in a particular local area
communities
.
Secondly many
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Secondly, many
corrpurations
a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporations
just try to show positive and effective sides of the
product
.
However
, they do not illustrate other dark side of the item.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, the greed of profit
tend
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tends
companies to use
illleagel
prohibited by law or by official or accepted rules
illegal
and unethical method to
adevertise
call attention to
advertise
to
product
, which affect the societies various
aspectes
a distinct feature or element in a problem
aspects
respects
To
conclude i
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conclude, I
conclude I
believe that some companies use to increase the sale of
product
without
consideration
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a consideration
of
eticial
of or relating to or involving light or optics
optical
values in the
society
, but commercialisation
also benifit
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also benefits
also benefit
has also benefited
has also benefitted
is also benefiting
the
society
to choose best.
but
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But
issue
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the issue
can be
ilminated
terminate, end, or take out
eliminated
illuminated
if
compant
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the company
company
a company
complaint
should follow the ethics of the
society
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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