You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain why you want to leave your current job describe what kind of job you are looking for ask for some help or advice

Dear Alina, I am writing to let you know my current job situation, hoping that you can give me some advice. I have decided to leave my current job at Otolaryngology-Head and Neck Surgery Clinic. I have worked there for several years now, and I think I have advanced as far as possible in
this
clinic. I would like to work at the hospital, where there are more opportunities. As you know my recent position at the clinic has been as a medical administrator. I have learned a great deal about
this
type of work and am Interested in it. I am hoping to find a similar sort of position at the hospital. As you have experience in the field, I was hoping that you could help me identify some hospitals that might be a good fit for me. I would
also
appreciate some help with my resume
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if you do not mind my asking. I hope to hear from you. Your friend, Mubi
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Consider elaborating slightly more on why you believe there are more opportunities at hospitals compared to your current clinic for a fuller response.
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Maintain consistent tone and formality throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph sticks to a single idea for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs, each serving a specific purpose.
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The tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend, being both friendly and respectful.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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