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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

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Reading, writing and maths have always been main parts of
education
 for many years. After the creation of computers and
computer
 technologies, some people, including me, think that
computer
skill
 should be counted as a fourth main
one
. On the
one
 hand, regarding
computer
skill
 as a fourth crucial part of
education
 may cause young children to get fed up with their studies and be harmful for their health, especially for the eyesight.
That is
 to say, a schoolboy
/
schoolgirl who usually had 3 main parts of
education
 to acquire, after adding the fourth
skill
 to him
/
her will find it a difficult and even complicated process to attain.
This
 results him
/
her in being exhausted and disappointed with his
/
her studies, in the end just giving in.
Furthermore
, learning a
computer
skill
 at
young age
Suggestion
a young age
 will bring about eyesight problems.
That is
 because to get
this
skill
, schoolchildren spend most of their time in front of the
computer
 looking
on
Suggestion
at
 the screen which
outspreads
fully extended in width
outspread
 adverse rays harming children's health.
On the other hand
, implementing a
computer
skill
 as
one
 of the crucial parts of
education
, we can make our children more intelligent and competitive. Having gained another
skill
, a child will gain more knowledge than the
one
 who has not.
This
make
Suggestion
makes
 him
/
her feel more confident and smarter.
Moreover
, he
/
she can find a suitable job in the future easily thanks to their extra
skill
. In conclusion,
although
 knowing only 3 main parts of
education
 is helpful, adding to
them
of them or themselves
their
 extra
skill
 will be high of use for children to develop themselves mentally.

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