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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

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Reading, writing and maths have always been main parts of
education
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 for many years. After the creation of computers and
computer
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 technologies, some people, including me, think that
computer
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skill
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 should be counted as a fourth main
one
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. On the
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 hand, regarding
computer
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skill
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 as a fourth crucial part of
education
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 may cause young children to get fed up with their studies and be harmful for their health, especially for the eyesight.
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 to say, a schoolboy
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schoolgirl who usually had 3 main parts of
education
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 to acquire, after adding the fourth
skill
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 to him
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her will find it a difficult and even complicated process to attain.
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 results him
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her in being exhausted and disappointed with his
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her studies, in the end just giving in.
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, learning a
computer
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skill
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 at
young age
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a young age
 will bring about eyesight problems.
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 because to get
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skill
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, schoolchildren spend most of their time in front of the
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 looking
on
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at
 the screen which
outspreads
fully extended in width
outspread
 adverse rays harming children's health.
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, implementing a
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skill
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 as
one
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 of the crucial parts of
education
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, we can make our children more intelligent and competitive. Having gained another
skill
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, a child will gain more knowledge than the
one
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 who has not.
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make
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makes
 him
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her feel more confident and smarter.
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, he
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she can find a suitable job in the future easily thanks to their extra
skill
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. In conclusion,
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 knowing only 3 main parts of
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 is helpful, adding to
them
of them or themselves
their
 extra
skill
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 will be high of use for children to develop themselves mentally.

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