MANY PEOPLE TODAY USE THEIR PHONES FOR SENDING TEXTS MORE THAN TALKING. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? ARE THERE MORE ADVANTAGES THAN DISADVANTAGES.

The invention of telephones through the means of modern technology advancement has influenced communication to a great length. For
this
, many are given to communicating
to
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with
others by sending electronic short messages rather than verbal communications, with the use of their mobile phones. Those that practice
this
, have their cogent reasons. Will
further
elaborate on the cons and pros of
this
development.
To begin
with, text messages, when well composed, conveys the exact thought of the sender thereby leaving no room for misunderstanding.
Hence
, both parties engaged in the communication chain are on
same page
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the same page
of the information passed across.
Also
, written messages are usually stored in the mobile phones of both the person sending as well as the
one
receiving it.
This
enables
one
to make references to messages sent previously.
This
is
in contrast
to talking, which sometimes fail to pass the exact message intended and cannot be recalled, except when recorded. On the
one
hand, many have argued that texting has greatly minimized the interpersonal
relationships especially
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relationships, especially
in the home fronts, whereby siblings are carried away with frequent exchange of information through electronic short messages rather than talking with
one
another, even whilst in
same environment
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the same environment
.
On the other hand
, some people believe that relating with other people through text messages is a time-saving approach.
This
stems from the fact that messages are easily conveyed and feedbacks received, within a very short space of time.
This
takes away the luxury of waiting for as long as it takes to pass on a message, especially when trying to engage people with tight schedules. It is
also
a convenient means of communicating.
This
has been proven effective in averting dangers. An example is
historic event
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a historic event
the historic event
of 2001 in Bangkok, whereby a female gubernatorial aspirant, escaped near death situation because of a text she receiving
fore warning
an early warning about a future event
forewarning
her of the
in coming
arriving at a place or position
incoming
danger. To conclude, people have found it more useful to send texts rather than speaking with other people, because of the compelling reasons that it is time saving and
also
convenient.
This
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This, however
however
, has
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
adverse effect mostly amongst family members.
Nevertheless
, written messages are efficient and timely.
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