In some countries the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening? What measures can be taken to stop it?

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The living standards of major cities of certain nations are becoming poor and poor in recent years. There are many aspects

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, with suitable actions every country can overcome

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the lives

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with, the rapid growth of population around the urban area know to be the primary cause of

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, a large number of people move to cities looking for better quality of life and job perspectives. Eventually,

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the existing quality of living in those areas. Because, governments cannot address the raising matters of the increasing population in these large cities

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the job market

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, some people left unemployed, and need of money for survival lead them to criminal activities.

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and foremost, encouraging people to move back to the rural areas by developing infrastructure and inviting investors to those areas. Another effective way is to

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as government hospitals, transportation systems and even better building new apartment complexes with better living quality. To recapitulate,

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as promoting rural living areas and modifying existing public infrastructure.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

286 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urbanization
Overpopulation
Infrastructure
Pollution
Housing shortages
Rental and property prices
Traffic congestion
Public transportation
Deforestation
Urban sprawl
Mental health
Economic disparity
Waste management
Environmental impact
Public health
Recreational areas
Wealth gap
Cost of living
Lifestyle
Stress

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In some countries the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening? What measures can be taken to stop it?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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