In some countries the quality of life in larger cities is declining. Why do you think this is happening? What measures can be taken to stop it?

The living standards of major cities of certain nations are becoming poor and poor in recent years. There are many aspects
for
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of
this
development.
However
, with suitable actions every country can overcome
this problems
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this problem
these problems
effecting
arousing affect
affecting
lives
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the lives
of the people in cities. 
To begin
with, the rapid growth of population around the urban area know to be the primary cause of
this
issue.
For instance
, a large number of people move to cities looking for better quality of life and job perspectives. Eventually,
this
trend
endanger
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endangers
the existing quality of living in those areas. Because, governments cannot address the raising matters of the increasing population in these large cities
such
as heavy traffic on roads,
lac
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
lack
laws
loss
of
fundamental needs
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the fundamental needs
of these people.
Moreover
,
job market
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the job market
could not
cop
come to terms with
cope
with the growing demand for professions.
Hence
, some people left unemployed, and need of money for survival lead them to criminal activities.
Also
, undeveloped living
ares
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
ears
auras
of these poor people make them vulnerable for certain deceases by making
this
even worse.
Nevertheless
, authorities could answer
these issue
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this issue
these issues
by applying numerous solutions.
First
and foremost, encouraging people to move back to the rural areas by developing infrastructure and inviting investors to those areas. Another effective way is to
generating
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generate
new employment opportunities to the public who live around urban cities. One more method to tackle
this problems
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this problem
these problems
would be by developing the public infrastructure
such
as government hospitals, transportation systems and even better building new apartment complexes with better living quality. To recapitulate,
as a result
of
over population
too much population
overpopulation
, a number of problems have been generated in urban cities. Yet, authorities can take suitable actions to solve
this
issue
such
as promoting rural living areas and modifying existing public infrastructure.
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Example:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Overpopulation
  • Infrastructure
  • Pollution
  • Housing shortages
  • Rental and property prices
  • Traffic congestion
  • Public transportation
  • Deforestation
  • Urban sprawl
  • Mental health
  • Economic disparity
  • Waste management
  • Environmental impact
  • Public health
  • Recreational areas
  • Wealth gap
  • Cost of living
  • Lifestyle
  • Stress
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