One of your penfriends wants to imporve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

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I have got your letter and I am really happy to know that you are moving to Sydney. I came to know that you are struggling with

English

and you are

also

planning to improve your

English

skill

. I have gone through

this

situation and I overcome

this

situation successfully.

Firstly

, My suggestion is for you to start

practicing

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practising

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apply

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listening. You can watch animated

English

movies which will help you a lot to improve your listening

skill

. Listening

news

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to news

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regularly will

also

enhance your capability to understand

advance

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advanced

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English

. By improving your listening

skill

you will be able to understand all the conversation and environment easily.

Secondly

, You can start speaking in front of a mirror to be fluent in speaking. You can select some topics and talk with yourself in front of a mirror which will help you to build your confidence. You can join a language club and start talking with your classmates. You can copy different dialogue from different movies that will improve your speaking

skill

as well.

Finally

, start learning

English

vocabulary. You can start reading news

paprs

Correct your spelling

papers

paper

and mark every new word from each page. Start googling with those new words and try to understand their meaning. You can follow Oxford dictionary

English

, In

this

book

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,book

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you will find

thousand

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thousands

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of words with synonyms. I think

above

Correct article usage

the above

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suggestions will help you a lot to improve your

advance

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advanced

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English

skill

Fix the agreement mistake

skills

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. Please write

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to me

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if you need more guidelines, I will be happy to help you.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

252 words

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One of your penfriends wants to imporve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

The Greeting

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Violent leisure programs has bad impacts on children. What are the causes and solutions for this problem?

Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources. Others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

how many students had sex in porn category? give the reasons