Describe a life-changing experience. Where it took place Who was with you What happened How it made you feel

As per my perspective, change is the law of nature and everyone encounters a different category of transformation in one’s life. I have
also
faced a lot of transformative experiences during my school, college and professional time.
However
, today
this
topic takes me back to a peculiar school-time experience. I remember that astonishing day when I was in 5th standard. Being a low self-esteem person, I used to sit at the
last
bench of the class. In those days, I was not good at making friends and as I was introvert as well, sharing any of my problems with either my classmates or my teachers was an uphill task for me. Interestingly, on one afternoon, my English teacher called me in the staff room and asked me if I have any family or financial problems at home. Somehow, I promptly said- “no ma’am, I do not have any
such
problem”.
Then
, she asked me, why I don’t take participation in any of the sports events, functions and any other extra-curricular activities. To reply
this
easy question I gathered all my courage and confidence and
then
said – “ma’am, the actual problem is my low confidence and my fear to express my views in front of others”. On
this
, she gave a motivational speech about the never-dying attitude of “Abraham Lincoln” which lead me to a turning point; it actually puts the foundation for my self-reliance. By the
next
morning, I started sitting on the
first
bench.
In addition
to that, I
also
established a good relationship with my classmates and students from different classes. The most unexpected thing happened approximately after one month of that speech, I
also
volunteered myself for the team organizing and managing an intra-school cricket tournament. All these transfigurations surprised my English teacher when she joined back the school after a long vacation. In the nutshell, I would like to say that change is inevitable and if it brings more confidence,
then
it could prove to be a mind-blowing milestone in your life-journey. So always be excited about the plausible forthcoming changes.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural landmarks
  • economic impacts
  • tourism
  • revenue
  • historical identity
  • tangible connection
  • aesthetic appeal
  • educational activities
  • sustainable tourism
  • preservation practices
  • overcrowding
  • property values
  • job opportunities
What to do next:
Look at other essays: