Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter, give details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take
Dear Manager,
I travelled on the London- Oxford
train
last
week. This
is a good trip for me. The train
faster
than other trains and the location is very good.
I got off the Add a missing verb
is faster
train
very quickly. I do not remember my luggage
. When I arrived home I remembered my luggage
but the train
came back to London. This
luggage
was very important for me and my baby
because I went to a London shop for my baby
.
I am very upset I called this
train
station but they only wrote a letter to a manager.
The customer really good person and upset me and my baby
.
My luggage
is red and big ıt has my name on it and a picture of Oxford University this
is basic luggage
.
I hope you can help me. If you help me I will be very happy because my baby
is born next week.
I am waiting for your answer.
Kind regards,Submitted by kubrairmak287 on
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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your thoughts into clearer paragraphs. For example, separate the details of the trip and the description of the luggage into different sections to enhance readability.
task achievement
Add a specific request, such as asking the manager to contact you once the luggage is found or providing a phone number.
general
Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity.
suitable writing tone
Use formal language consistently throughout the letter.
task completion
The letter includes all necessary details, such as the travel details and description of the luggage.
politeness tone
The closing of the letter is polite and appropriate, showing consideration and respect.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.