Governments and big companies should work together to reverse environmental damage, rather than expecting individuals to take responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

Conservation of
environment
Suggestion
the environment
is a common issue in today’s society. Both, the Governments and individuals put responsibility on each other’s
shoulders
Suggestion
shoulder
, rather contribute their own part. It is widely believed that reversal of climatic destruction is the responsibility of the state along with giant industries,
instead
of blaming the common people. I strongly disagreed with
this
point of view, as I believed that individual’s efforts with
government
can bring significant positive changes, while persuading the governments and large companies to take protective measures.
First
of all, individuals can repair the environmental
impairments working
Accept comma addition
impairments, working
together as a community.
This
is because the effects of many small efforts quickly add up.
For example
, in the cities if once a week every person chose public transport rather using their private car, reduction of air pollution would be at great level.
Moreover
, cleaning of houses and
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
is equally important. It is
public obligation
Suggestion
a public obligation
to dump the waste material in appropriate places and try to reduce the level of litter.
However
, it is true that action of single person cannot bring significant differences; many individuals taking the same action could bring a dramatic environmental change.
Furthermore
, the action of so many people can
also
influence
government
and corporations, due to the fact that people have power as both community and consumer. Public voice would have a great impact on huge companies and authorities.
For instance
, they can organize
social media campaign
Suggestion
a social media campaign
to boycott certain products
such
as plastic industry, packaging food etc. There is no question that
government
and the large companies play
role
Suggestion
a role
in protecting the natural environment. The environmentalists can raise their voice and draw the attention of
authorities
Suggestion
the authorities
if they can see any company is dumping its waste material in water bodies.
This
public pressure enables the
government
to take serious actions against
such
companies. To conclude,
although
government
and corporations should actively participate to rehabilitate the environment, yet individual efforts cannot be ignored. The communities could bring positive changes to improve the climatic damages as every person in society should take part in
this
matter to have safe and green land.
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