Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays recreation, leisure and sports activities play an important role in any societies.

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herefore private

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Therefore, private

and public organizations should contribute in promoting sports and social activities by providing infrastructure or by conducting games and public events. In my opinion providing facilities to local societies can have many beneficial effects, so I agree with

this

point of view. On the one hand, sports have a great value for any countries. It is an enjoyable and effective way to improve physical and mental health.

In addition

, it can relieve stress, i

ncreas

become bigger or greater in amount

increase

increased

increases

fitness and prevent the development of chronic disease,

such

as heart d

isaese.

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

disease

Thus

, arrangement of sports projects will boost t

he healthy

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healthier

environment in the society and

also

become t

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to the

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at the

source of motivation.

Furthermore

, sports activities not only reduce crime, but

also

decrease alcohol and drug misuse and anti-social behaviours.

On the other hand

, citizens of a

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quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity

some

countries or any local c

omunities

a group of people living in a particular local area

communities

have their own ancient traditions and forefather culture. Companies should try to help people maintain and remember their traditional values.

For example

, they can host entertainment programs like cultural dance and art play. It can encourage people to participate in the social activities and enhance their skills.

Furthermore

, it will maintain the culture between the generations. In conclusion, the game events and social gathering are very important to c

ommunity

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the community

a community

w

ich

interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class

which

create a positive and healthy environment and lead to p

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peace

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Moreover, such

such

events could improve people's skills and flourish their talents.