We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

World population is increasing day by day. Big countries like

china

a communist nation that covers a vast territory in eastern Asia; the most populous country in the world

China

is experiencing massive growth in

last few years

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the last few years

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i

refers to the speaker or writer

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will be focusing on the reason, why we should be only concerned about our own communities and countries. All of us love the place where we have been brought up and the

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

who use to feed us, when we were kids.

That is

something we should always keep in our mind. The reality of us lies in

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the re

itself.

However there

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However, there

are

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a lot

lots

of people

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far away

from us who suffer

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every day

of their life.

it

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It

could be due to political turmoil or natural disaster. For

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an

instance, just look at the

peoeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

peoples

of

syria

an Asian republic in the Middle East at the east end of the Mediterranean; site of some of the world's most ancient centers of civilization

Syria

, the life they are living in & the difficulties they faced in the middle of

syrian

of or relating to or characteristic of Syria or its people or culture

Syrian

rebels and

iss

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

is

. We see those visuals from the television and the social media. We are really very much concerned about them. But

first

and foremost people around us are more important to all of us. Help our communities and analyse the issues that they faced

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with

every day of life.

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an

example, one of my

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friends

from our town was in need of funds to finish

he's

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his

degree.

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With

the help of our community

members we

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members, we

have managed to send him to

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study

.

Morever helping

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Moreover, helping

Moreover helping

your own people will never make loose anything from you. In

conclusion i

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conclusion, I

conclusion I

would like to tell help our people as much as we can.