These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time.  Explain why you think this change has happened.  What are the effects of this change in attitude?

#people #repair #items #time #change #effects #attitude

In the salad day of

millennium

Suggestion

the millennium

, the society is polarised into two

part

Suggestion

parts

almost equally regarding the notion,

wheather

introduces two alternatives

whether

weather

wealthier

people should throw damaged things away or repair

damaged item

Suggestion

damaged items

the damaged item

and keep them for a long time. Different people have their

distrinct

(often followed by 'from') not alike; different in nature or quality

distinct

district

mindset. The following paragraphs would

shade

get rid of

shed

light on both the approaches before making a final note. To commence with the

first

notion, there are

myraid

too numerous to be counted

myriad

things to be shared in its favour.

First

and

foremst

ranking above all others

foremost

foremast

, economical benefit should

also

be considered by regarding

this

issue.

Therefore

, it is evident that manufacturing new goods contributes to the appearance of annual proficiency for

country

Suggestion

the country

Accept space

Suggestion

can be easily exemplified by the fact that

majority

Suggestion

the majority

a majority

of markets sell their production and the taxes from these

selling

Suggestion

sellers

are going to be in government's charge and governments themselves have an opportunity to improve living standards of dwellers.

For instance

Accept space

a recent survey reported that the average level of living has significantly increased within 7 years in

Suggestion

the UK

on the grounds of providing a big campaign of production goods. Shifting towards the

second

school of

throught

the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about

thought

, throwing away a big amount of things will cause several problems regarding pollution and extinction of flora and fauna.

As a result

, rarely do people realize about

consequences

Suggestion

the consequences

such

actions.

For example

Accept space

by casting old things

Accept space

there is appearing a need of

production

Suggestion

producing

new ones for people

Accept space

hence

it will bring an

overexplotion

of natural resources.

Furthermore

Accept space

throwing away elderly things in

ocean

Suggestion

the ocean

will have a negative effect on condition of flora and fauna

Accept space

The more vegetable life will die out

Accept space

the more water animals will suffer from

this

and in the end they will be

finally

eliminated.

Moreover

Accept space

considering the fact that fishes are being used as the main food in coastal provinces

Accept space

it is needless to say that

such

extinction will exacerbate the situation for those who live there. Hammering the

last

nail, having discussed the argument and counter argument,

refers to the speaker or writer

personally feel that, manufacturing things can be advantageous for government as well as baleful for the ecosystem in general. But we should

cafeful

Suggestion

carefully

careful

handle old things.

Submitted by shawonbvcps on Tue Sep 17 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

14Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

361 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
University education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past, tertiary education was limited to a small proportion of people who were the most academic students. Today, however, many more young people have the opportunity of going to university, and I think that this is a much better situation for several reasons.
5
band
Some people say that we should not encourage sports games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with?
In the contemporary era, whether students should be inspired to play inter-school sports has become an upsurging subject of widespread debate and concern. Some people assert that it fosters competitiveness rather than collaboration. However, I disagree with this statement, and in this essay, I will demonstrate the reasons.
5
band
Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?
Whether putting a large amount of money into analysing space or using finance to fund standards of living around the globe is a controversial topic. The writer of this essay agrees that using money to boost living condition is superior as it can be invested into lowering the crime rate, while also leading to a better society despite many who believes that space research is more important due to the knowledge it provides.
4
band
Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In the fast-paced world, environmental pollution is at its peak stage. Some people argue that government take responsibility, to control pollution and housing problems for illness and disease. I do not agree with this statement.
4
band
People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?
Nowadays many people prefer to live in big cities due to better infrastructure and amenities. Movement of people from rural to urban area has drastically increased in the past few years, which has made the city life a host of several problems for its residents. In this essay, I will discuss some problems of urban life and propose solutions.

These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. Explain why you think this change has happened. What are the effects of this change in attitude?

Your opinion

University education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that we should not encourage sports games among schools because they lead to competition rather than cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with?

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?

These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time.  Explain why you think this change has happened.  What are the effects of this change in attitude?