These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time.
 Explain why you think this change has happened.
 What are the effects of this change in attitude?

In the salad day of
millennium
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the millennium
, the society is polarised into two
part
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parts
almost equally regarding the notion,
wheather
introduces two alternatives
whether
weather
wealthier
people should throw damaged things away or repair
damaged item
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damaged items
the damaged item
and keep them for a long time. Different people have their
distrinct
(often followed by 'from') not alike; different in nature or quality
distinct
district
mindset. The following paragraphs would
shade
get rid of
shed
light on both the approaches before making a final note. To commence with the
first
notion, there are
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
things to be shared in its favour.
First
and
foremst
ranking above all others
foremost
foremast
, economical benefit should
also
be considered by regarding
this
issue.
Therefore
, it is evident that manufacturing new goods contributes to the appearance of annual proficiency for
country
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the country
.
Accept space
.
it
Suggestion
It
can be easily exemplified by the fact that
majority
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the majority
a majority
of markets sell their production and the taxes from these
selling
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sellers
are going to be in government's charge and governments themselves have an opportunity to improve living standards of dwellers.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
a recent survey reported that the average level of living has significantly increased within 7 years in
UK
Suggestion
the UK
on the grounds of providing a big campaign of production goods. Shifting towards the
second
school of
throught
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
, throwing away a big amount of things will cause several problems regarding pollution and extinction of flora and fauna.
As a result
, rarely do people realize about
consequences
Suggestion
the consequences
of
such
actions.
For example
,
Accept space
,
by casting old things
,
Accept space
,
there is appearing a need of
production
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producing
new ones for people
,
Accept space
,
hence
it will bring an
overexplotion
of natural resources.
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
throwing away elderly things in
ocean
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the ocean
will have a negative effect on condition of flora and fauna
.
Accept space
.
The more vegetable life will die out
,
Accept space
,
the more water animals will suffer from
this
and in the end they will be
finally
eliminated.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
considering the fact that fishes are being used as the main food in coastal provinces
,
Accept space
,
it is needless to say that
such
extinction will exacerbate the situation for those who live there. Hammering the
last
nail, having discussed the argument and counter argument,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally feel that, manufacturing things can be advantageous for government as well as baleful for the ecosystem in general. But we should
cafeful
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carefully
careful
handle old things.
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